Tears of Joy

So, haven't really been in the eloquent mood lately, but I decided I would post a song I wrote about a million years ago.....would love to hear feedback, not like I'm trying to sell the thing, but I like the input! For the record, I know that it's not gold record caliber, but I think it's at least catchy!!!


Tears of Joy

I'm in the shadows without her,
everything is cold and dark in my sphere.
She's so far away from me,
but always one kiss from here.
I whisper her name softly,
and cry for her return,
soon we will be together,
and then our hears shall burn.

(Chorus)

Can you feel it in your heart?
Does it make you sing?
Loving you from the start,
my feelings inside you bring....
You and I were made for each other,
I knew that all along.
Rain will never fall in our world,
only Tears of Joy.

(End Chorus)

The weeks and months pass by at a glance,
and laugh at all the time.
Holding you forever with me,
You were always meant to be mine.
Like petals on a flower,
love is fragrant and fragile.
Thank you for being a beacon,
in the storm of my desire.

(Repeat Chorus)


Sappy, i know, but what the hell, it's better than this second one. I'll post that one next, just to keep each post to a polite size.